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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very entertaining. Thanks for a great read. Only one complaint - the chapters are too short! LOL
Oh, actually I've just remembered that I have two other 'complaints', well, not complaints really, ,they are just little niggling things - the first is your word 'anyways' - no Briton would ever put an 's' on the end of it, that just screams; 'American person talking or thinking, he cannot be an Englishman!' The other thing is that you refer to Snape as the 'Potion's Master' and that should be 'Potions Master' i.e. there should not be an apostrophe between the 'n' and the 's; in the word Potions.
Oh, actually I've just remembered that I have two other 'complaints', well, not complaints really, ,they are just little niggling things - the first is your word 'anyways' - no Briton would ever put an 's' on the end of it, that just screams; 'American person talking or thinking, he cannot be an Englishman!' The other thing is that you refer to Snape as the 'Potion's Master' and that should be 'Potions Master' i.e. there should not be an apostrophe between the 'n' and the 's; in the word Potions.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story - thanks.
BTW there are still quite a few errors of spelling etc but the story is interesting and good enough that even picky old me can ignore them - well, okay, almost ignore them. LOL
BTW No 2 - I do so agree with you about writers complaining about short reviews. Sometimes, even though you might like to write more, you just cannot think of anything to write other than that you have enjoyed the fic. When authors beg for more reviews, especially when they threaten to stop writing unless such and such a number of people review, well I find that just makes me not want to read the story any longer.
BTW there are still quite a few errors of spelling etc but the story is interesting and good enough that even picky old me can ignore them - well, okay, almost ignore them. LOL
BTW No 2 - I do so agree with you about writers complaining about short reviews. Sometimes, even though you might like to write more, you just cannot think of anything to write other than that you have enjoyed the fic. When authors beg for more reviews, especially when they threaten to stop writing unless such and such a number of people review, well I find that just makes me not want to read the story any longer.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this chapter was so cute. Enjoyment factor 10 out of 10. It's usually the sweet, innocent kisses that keep readers at the edge of their seats and wanting more. Give 'em a treat, and they keep coming back. Thank you for udpating. It's been quite a bit. Please udate sooner, and do you have a mailing list?
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one big huge AWWWW :) I can't wait to see more it's very well written and oh so gooshy good :)
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. keep it up, I really hope this doesn't turn into one of those stories you get really into but never gets finished. anyway great work!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Yay! Do we get more twin action in the next one? They're so much fun ^_^
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I just found this one and am enjoying it! I hope there will be more soon!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I love reading it :D Please update soon!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. ^^
So the death eaters thing Harry's Snape's love child, eh? Wont they be surprised at the violent (and perhaps magical) side of Mr. Augustine. >:) mwahahahahaha
I can't wait. Keep up the good work!
So the death eaters thing Harry's Snape's love child, eh? Wont they be surprised at the violent (and perhaps magical) side of Mr. Augustine. >:) mwahahahahaha
I can't wait. Keep up the good work!