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by lazycrazykitten

person Winters Prologue
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARG!!! Why did it end there. I can't wait to read more this is a bloody good story. gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com - please email me when you update.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's not good, now Severus will have to come save Harry or Harry might release his mad energy and show Voldy a thing or two. I can't wait to see what happens next, I look forward to the next chapter.
person anniea
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter! it could have been a bit longer though! please update soon *kisses*
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I a bit sad that Draco is so cluelessly evil in this story so far, but you've done a real nice job with Harry's character.
person Elphaba
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok this seems like an awesome story!
person Rachael
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am SO LOVING this story! the concept is great! I really like how realistically you're portraying Severus and the other characters. It's refreshing to find an author who actually takes the time to develop characters and their relationships. Your Draco is also a good character-he's obviously a D.E., and i have a feeling he will be playing a bigger role, am i right?? lol. Harry's MPD is well thought out too, his "child harry" is very endearing, the love for animals and things. i really do enjoy this story, and can't wait to read more! do you have an update list? if you do i'd like to be added--insane.aktor@gmail.com--if not then hey, you have my email now XD. I do wonder how harry is going to adjust to being the saviour-i'm pretty sure it won't be an easy transition, no?

anyway-keep it up!!!!!!!!
Rachael
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a kiss! And Death Eaters coming up? Uh oh. Also, this Voldemort is creepy. I like it. Cheers!
person Jess
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More More More please!!!!!
person kawaiiyashie
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
evil ur pure evil i want more!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is so good to see a story that has a lot of thought, as well as heart, behind it. Please keep up the good work.