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by lazycrazykitten

person Layla
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. I find it interesting how you have Harry protrayed. It is sad to know that Harry's relatives would bring him to the point of having to kill them to get away from them. At least at the insitution they treated him better. The thought of no one knowing where he was all those years considering he is the savior is beyond me. just shows you how much they care. i like the idea of Severus and Harry liking each other and are afraid to let each other know about it. It is crazy to think that Harry could be Severus son only because his last name does not sound familar. Now trouble is about to happen for once Severus finds out that Harry is gone and taken by Draco hell will be paid. I would fear Severus before I fear Sirius. Please continue when you can.
person Lyra
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you arn'g rushing their relationship, it makes the story more believable and interesting to read. and you meenie you left us with a cliffie, shame on you ;P
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New reader here. I am enjopying this fic so much! I do hope you get a break from school soon because I'd love to read more!!! :)
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm waiting for harry/dorian to go crazy and kill people, he can still do that right, right? :D
(with voldie sitting there all unprotected *hehe*)
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I really like that you have an abused!Harry that actually shows the long-term affects of his abuse. I recently read one that "neatly wrapped everthing up" in about 10 chapters. I was kinda like, really, you think so? ok then.

LadyS
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well my dear i will be waiting for the next chapter when ever you want to post it. i understand that studing doesn't leave you much time to do anything and when you have free time you catch up on your fanfiction reading not writing. so please e-mail me when you get another free time and write the next chapter and post it.
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shit~!!! I don't think Voldy wants to be doing that. Harry's gonna snap and kill the bastard with his own two hands!!! (Thus full-filling the prophecy! hehehe)

Keep up the great work! I eagerly await your next chapter!@
person Hambares
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What will happen to Draco? What about Harry? ARGH!!!! Dare I ask about how Severus will take Harry's capture?
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue your good work!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMGOMG -has mini panic attack- this is not good...not good at all!