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by lazycrazykitten

person Anon
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant brilliant brilliant! I particularly like the "...except for Snape..."-lines.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I hope your mom will be alright. 'o_o'


Anyway, great chapter. I liked how you handled Harry's discovery of things AND Snape's startling discovery of his attraction to Harry. Good work all around. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
person Wilder
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Severus here! torture by cupcake, just loverly! can't wait to see their relationship develope! i bet harry jumps him before anything else
person poohbear74
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am soo sorry to hear about your mom, I really,really hope she gets well.
person poohbear74
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh I forgot I really liked the chapter.
person Breanna
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is awesome! I love Harry-Dnape goodness, and Harry's jus ttoo precious in this story!

Add me to your update list, please? My email's wearetherobotsbiatch@hotmail.com
person jadedjen
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooooo excited that you've updated! Yay. This story has become a sorta addiction for me. I love the dualities in Harry's personality and you've got quite the interesting plot going on (btw, Saami is adorable! :) ) Sorry to hear about all the trouble you've been having, and no doubt we're all hoping things will work out for you in the end. My mother has sclerodema as well, so I know how hard that is to handle, and how it can affect a person's body, so my deepest empathies... symphathies... are with you. :)

Still loving the story and best of wishes to you,
Jade
person rachel
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! I like how Severus was watching Harry throughout-- in the pet store, apothecary, licking icing . . . Mmmm. And I like that Saami; very amusing pet. Sorry to hear of all your RL troubles. How things settle down for you.
person shadow
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, red belley black's are awsome... good choice

i love aussie snakes we have some of the most deadliest on earth

i was almost bitten by a huge one in a park once, very scary when angered

update again soon!!!
person middykun
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Yeah it was really long. And I just wanted to say that in your story harry bought his wand on my birthday ; ) August 15. I also love the name you picked out for him and the pet andandnanddhajh. It was good. haha.
Sorry to hear about your mom though! I hope you guys find a solution to it. Tell her I hope they find a way to make her better!