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by lazycrazykitten

person kneeya
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Harry fun, insane, unpredictable and did I mention fun? Harry should just run circles around them! Can't wait for the next chapter. This is great I love this story! Sincerely, the ramblings of a mad woman. Thank you.
person Nonny
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!
love love!!
update soon
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with sparkleh. It may have been slightly more realistic to say those are the consequences of a concentrated form of the potion, but I believe as consequences they are realistic. Speaking from the point of view of an adult who has suffered from ADHD all my life, I can honestly say that I've been so distracted that I forgot to blink (to the point that the dryness affected my vision for days afterward) and that I've been too distracted to breathe (but only for a few seconds).

None of that matters anyway. You are the author (and a brilliant one at that), and therefore, you can do whatever you want. Keep writing; I'm loving this story!
person landra
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A shared bathroom ^^! I'm looking forward to your next chapter *gg*!!
person sparkleh
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The consequences of an undiluted Distraction Potion are completely unrealistic... breathing is an automatic response, there's no real need to think about it unless you're trying to go against nature. Otherwise we would all die in our sleep.
person anniea
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! good chapter please update soon. and thanks for the email! *kisses*
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
harry very cool and cute.i like twins:)i hope snape jealous harry.because i like jealously snape
person poohbear74
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!!!!!!!!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Snapey XD His mornings are not going to be easy!!

I love this story!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story already, kind of creppy but well written