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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sweet want more pretty please!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Cute if a little amateurish in its rushed nature. Also more commas are needed to separate third-person names from the rest of a sentence. Otherwise, this is a fair beginning.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 I can't think why Draco is so pleased that Harry is pregnant. He thinks Harry is attractive but that's a long way from wanting to be a father or having Harry carry his child. And why is it necessarily a Malfoy heir? It could be a girl with Harry's coloring. Would Draco still want it then?
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh way tooo funny! I sooo need chapter 2! Harry still has to serve Draco for one month! And now he's pregnant with Draco's child!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Harry's up the duff!!!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it. cann't wait for chapter two
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i cant wait for more!