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for The Storm

by StarKneazle

person bluedecor
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that you have been berated for not writing according to someone else's schedule. I find it astounding that readers give authors a hard time about the posting of the entertainment that writers provide for us for free! Besides, sometimes one must wait on one's muse.

schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this story is heating up. The character seem very real to me.
person sexysarah
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Very, very nice... Also, cookies for you for your note, it's hard for me too, with two kids under two, I barely get time to write. If readers can't get that, too bad, you come first! (they're good cookies too, homemade with chocolate chips and oatmeal!) Keep up with your passions, Sarah
person morganabythesea
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :-) Thank you for your reply. My worries are only aimed at authors who never continue their stories, not authors that write on their own schedule. Believe me, I understand real life schedules too. I am more than happy to wait for your updates because you write so well and because I know that the updates will come.

Thanks again for sharing.

person olive
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very glad that you take the time to write quality. this story in particular is very well written and i am enjoying it very much.
person Lyssander
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I dont care how often you write...I'm just glad that you share your talent with us. I love your story and am glad that I found it.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is soo good. I always like relationship fics featuring more than two people (maybe that's just my commitment issues popping up), and I love how you handle this: you keep it hot, but you show the real feelings that each of them have for the others - love how Hermione affects the relationship between Sev and Lucius. Love the way all the relationships developing. Great work!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention. My favorite part is when Lucius and Snape stop in the middle of a blowjob to make sure she's alright. That was surprisingly sweet and I loved it. I hope you'll forgive me for reviewing twice . . .
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
person morganabythesea
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to updates on any of your stories!!! You write so well, I know you are one of the best authors on this website or any other, but I have been disappointed so many times recently that I have to ask if you are going to finish these stories and what do we do with the people who don't? There should be some rule about posting a a story you have no intention of finishing.

Anyway, that is my pet peeve. I hope serious authors might take it up too. It would give you more exposure and limit our hunting and pecking for stories. As you know this website is not reader friendly with favorites, or updates. We as readers acutally spend quite a bit of time trying to keep up with authors and invest in their stories and reputations as good writers, or serious authors.

In searching for stories I would much rather find you or other authors who are serious about their work than people who just decided to write with no story-line or end in sight.

Sorry for bothering you with this. You are a wonderful writer and I hope you keep it up. If there is anything I can do to help, just let me know.

I appreciate your talent so much, but the inconsistency in what this website allows to be posted, just makes me crazy! :-)

Anyway, thanks so much for your actual talent and (I hope) your willingness and ability to update regularly. The rest I will deal with later.

Morgana