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for The Storm

by StarKneazle

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg o.0 yesh chappy 7 was just wowzerzz!!!! hot, sexy suductive, intense! amazing fic cant wait to read the rest
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant believe those 2...such chldish behavior. hurting her like that i hope they get the hexing they diserve for hurting her so.
i hope hermione gives both of them a peace of her mind and maybe even denies their please for her. grrrr...

aewsoem fic by the way! cant wait till u upload to read more on this!!
person Terrie
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been a very hot story that just got more interesting. Hermione has been emotionally hurt by both men. I know all the things I would like to say to both of them if it had been me so I'm anxious to see what Hermione is going to do or say. Age should equate to maturity but as we all know that isn't always true and these two just proven that. I say it would serve them right if Kingsley, Remus or some other man offering her comfort, platonic or otherwise, and cut them both off.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story as always! Wondering what Severus or Hermione will make what happened ok, or tolerable. Lucius should not have been there, Severus and Hermione should have had some time. Anyway, still loving the story.
person nastygrl
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How is Hermione going to ever forgive Severus for this? How is he going to justify this to himself, Hermione and Lucius? He should turn his anger on Lucius, next. That would be some hot sex! Can't wait to read where you go next!
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please
person Lynn
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read all 8 chapters of The Storm today and I just wanted to take a moment to compliment you on a very well written hot story. I love your characterizations of Hermione, Severus and Lucius and I can't wait to read mor.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!

Your story has been nominated for 'Best Threesome' at the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal!

To accept your nomination, please reply to smutasticawards at yahoo dot com by October 16th.

Regards,
Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
person Elphaba
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow is it hot in here! Great Chapter!