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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Both chapters were excellent, but I have to admit feeling "saved" somehow by the ending of this one. You had me worried for a while about Severus, Lucius, and Hermione. Although I know they are dangerous men, they also have a good side and that is what I was hoping would show up again. I hope she forgives them after a lot of self-examination on all of their parts. That didn't come out the way I intended! (LOL) I'm sure you know what I really meant. :-)
It is going to be a difficult relationship between them, but I hope it will be a good relationship in the end. I see a future for Lucius and Hermione with Severus and more so for Severus with Lucius and Hermione. Then of course there is the relationship between Lucius and Hermione and Lucius and Severus. I want them all to work out! :-) Loving the story, and for what ever reason, loving the updates!
It is going to be a difficult relationship between them, but I hope it will be a good relationship in the end. I see a future for Lucius and Hermione with Severus and more so for Severus with Lucius and Hermione. Then of course there is the relationship between Lucius and Hermione and Lucius and Severus. I want them all to work out! :-) Loving the story, and for what ever reason, loving the updates!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot. Keep up the good work.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep updating moree!Like once a week!!
the story is greatt!
the story is greatt!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed no porn ;) Wonderful Chapter! I was hoping you would make Sev realize he was an ass!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius and Severus both seem to have fallen for Hermione, but will she forgive them? I suppose Severus did not want anyone to witness him being tender and Lucius does as he is told as far as Severus is concerned, until now. What next?
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How do you do that? You manage to be funny as hell, erotic, and effectively angsty at the same time! This was a fab update, I'm glad they're both beginning to really value her, especially Sev. LOL@at poor confused Ron...at least Harry is beginning to notice something is up. I wonder what the reaction will be when the shit hits the fan. This was funny as hell:
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are amazing!
I like the way that Snape really doesn't understand what he has done wrong, and had to be shown with a memory. I wish it were that easy to explain to people in real life.
I like the way that Snape really doesn't understand what he has done wrong, and had to be shown with a memory. I wish it were that easy to explain to people in real life.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I hope that Lucius and Severus will be able to apologize to Hermione so that they can all be together again.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Dark Lord has such bad timing! Glad that Snape realised what he did. Now he can hopefully do something about it, before it is too late. Great chapter!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hit him again, Lucius!