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for The Storm

by StarKneazle

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh love, don't give a fig about what readers say to you about updating frequently. Real Life is a bitch, (a cunt actually, as I have come to find out recently) and as shocking as it is, us writers DO have a life outside of AFF.NET. Take your time. A well written story is worth waiting for. Don't worry about losing readers. Some of the stories I read go 2-3 weeks, and sometimes a month in between updates. You will not lose readers, I promise. Most of us are loyal. Sadly, I have finished this story, but I am off to peruse the plethera of other works you have published. SO, no worries. I loved this story. I have only read one other Lucius/Severus/Hermione before, it was a one shot, in the dark in a club, and it was so hot. I was pleased to find this one. As odd a pairing it is, I like it. I will be patiently waiting for an update love!! XXOO
person alina290
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had been avoiding this story for some time already although I had read part of the first chapter. I am up date on what you have so far written. I like your style. Keep up the good work.
Liz
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving your writing and I'm patiently waiting for your next post. Keep up the good, although sometimes, hard work. I should know. Feel free to read my offerings to the site- Bewaer the Billowy Cape of Doom; a Mauraders/Phantom of the Opera crossover and my current fic, Ravenrin & Slytherclaw; a bit of naughtiness me and my friend came up with a while ago and have only just got round to writing.
person nastygrl
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I just freaking love this story! I adore Severus, angsty, angry, bitter and all. And Lucius, the tall blond gorgeous man. Who wouldn't want to be Hermione?

I can't wait to read what happens next!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, things are getting interesting...I think Harry knows what's up...lol@Ron being oblivious, probably for the best, lord knows how he'd react. I wonder if Severus really is ready to make amends properly and can he really share, like share share. lol. I like Lucius in this story a lot. He's kinda sweet there at the end...Awww. Can't wait to see how Sev proceeds. More please : )
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I hope that Lucius and Severus return from their meeting with Voldemort and that Severus will apologize to Hermione for what he did to her. Then they can all be together again. I look forward to reading more.
person Elphaba
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously cliffhangers suck! Great chapter though
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who wouldn't have fun saying Mwhua ha ha? Although the evil might be coming in the next chapter depending on what happens to Severus and Lucius next. I think Harry is too savvy to let anything go past him and I'm sure he'll be quizzing Hermione soon.

Pretty Girl is in my favourites to read so I'll be sure to leave a review.
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read quite a few SS/HG/LM stories, but this one is definately one of the best! Update soon!
person Nikte
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story, I couldn