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for The Storm

by StarKneazle

person hgelman
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW Great chapter!
person LilCas
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please keep writing this it is so Good!!!
person devias
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow good story please keep writing it!
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, Severus and Lucius are so hot... I wouldn't mind being in Hermione's place. Update soon please
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person pussywillowxxxo
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The first four chapters are great!! This contains three of my favorite characters. I especially liked the concern Lucius showed for Hermione in chapter 4. I can't wait to discover your plot!
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You catch L & S 's personalities perfectly. Please, continue!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
see I thought it was ace anyway but that last chapter - wow! I love Lucius being submissive for a change and Severus is just so dark and demanding mmm! I loved how they were both concerned about Hermione and you are evil leaving just there but I have faith cos I know the next chapter is gonna be bloody brilliant! But please, don't leave me hanging too long!