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for The Storm

by StarKneazle

schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's Pants this is HOT~!

And you can thank SoftObsidian74 for sending me to you! Your stories came highly recommended, and she wasn't wrong!

I like how you reversed the usual Lucius as a dom - makes it very interesting. Hermione's one lucky witch!
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person sdemelo
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see a new chapter! Mmmmmm these three are certainly having fun!!
Yum
person Lyssander
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay story!!!
i wait for more
person Jen
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about your troubles :)

Love the new chapters.

Thanks!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've been checking for weeks for updates on this. I'm sorry to hear about your troubles, but glad to see you are back. I hope things work out for you.

I don't know how I feel about domineering Snape, but I do love him and Lucius together. Thanks for the great read.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
person Snakelette
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A positively evil place to stop that chapter! I can't wait for more. The smut is delicious, and I'm hoping they'll get even closer. Who needs Ron. right?
person hgelman
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok - first of all, I hope you are feeling better and I am sorry about your boyfriend. I am so glad that you updated. It was well worth the wait! This is a very hot story - I would L-O-V-E to find myself in the middle of a Lucius/Severus sandwich - yummy! I also like your take on Snape being the dominant one. All in all, a great story!
person chyara
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will you be finishing this fic?