rate_review Reviews

I know it's too much to ask for but I hope you see this review and know how incredible a writer you are. I'm glad to have come across it and happy that you were able to write as much as you did. Hope you are doing well.

Would really love to know what's next

If nothing else you can write great sex scenes with a few minor exceptions. However you had Severus practically rape Hermione in front of Lucius who does nothing. You crossed a line there and quite frankly rape doesn't do Shit for me unlike your other reviewers, clearly.Shameful,there are No proper apologies given and she runs after them? Not something normal ppl would do. She has No self respect and definitely requires professional help. Your story doesn't work,it helps that they are so out of character because of that act of violation, that it's not believable and plain down disturbing. Normally ooc's aren't quite so unpalatable, you prove the opposite easily. I would thank you to not share any other stories....

Omg please don't be dead or anything! Then I'd have no hope of getting to read more, which sounds terribly greedy I suppose, but this is sooooo good! And hot. Very very hot. Lol so please update soon!

I really hope you continue this story!

Please please continue! Pretty pretty please!!

This story is amazing!!! But it hasn't been updated for several years...are you planning on ever finishing it? Pretty please continue! I'm dying to see if and how Hermione reconciles with Severus and Lucius!

@11 Omg I absolutely love this story!! Please update soon!!

I absolutely love this story!!!!! Please please please please please write more!!!!! I really want to know where this goes and what happens to everyone!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!

Just found your story, really like it. Hope you'll continue.
Would love Sev playing sub in apology.
Anyhow, thanks for writing.