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for The Path

by ShadowDragon

schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, definately an interesting story :D

I like the portraying of characters. Especially Harry's. You played the war's effects on him well and believably.
I also like that while it realistic and serious, there's also some things that add humor to the story so that it isn't so heavy or boring :)

I can't say anything more than this story kicks ass, and I can't wait for you to write more!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo.. I'm thinking about an update.
I wanna know whats going to happen. I wanna know more about your Harry, how he acts, how he thinks, but most of all how he and Xander "get along".
Soooo.. Plz update!
person R
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really need to update more often. Especially if that chapters are sooo short *pout* *shakes fist at author*
Please please update again sooner!!

Cheers!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Xander is going to react well to that... NOT! Please continue
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Now there's an introduction. More please?
person Starfall
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you plan to continue with this story as well as your Harry and Riddick story, these first two chapters have definitely caught my eye =)
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have a feeling this is a FIC TO GO DOWN IN HISTORY! Can't wait for more!!!!
person Em
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!!!
Excellent story so far, love to see how this turns out. Well done and keep writing! :)
person Niharana
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:)
poor Xander
person hrsegrrl
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Yeah, Friesians are pretty damn big horses. And I'm not 100% sure, but Xander seems like a bit of a city boy to me. Not that he doesn't know how to rough it, not at all, it's just that he wouldn't have been exposed to some of the things that country kids are. Like freaking huge horses. I'm a bit of a horse-patoot, myself, which is why I knew exactly what you meant when you said 'Friesian.' Interesting fic, and I agree... Any crossover that ends in slash between Harry and a character played by Vin Diesel just HAS to be nummy. :-D