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you write well and this fic is well paced and all that but..... it just got to unnaturally PC for my tastes and while this is a land of make believe and magic i like a little realty in the emotions of the players. i don't think i can keep reading. i just want to gag at the way hermione is acting not long after her brutal assault and news of the concept of raising your rapist's child. she doesnt seem to go through any trauma at all.
OK OK i am sorry i am getting carried away. i do think you have a talent for writing. i understand that you don't want to be held back by sorting through and writing all of the emotion and trauma, and that you want to get back to the good stuff. maybe you could write a chapter that uses sum sort of magic to help the psychological damage she must be going through. things like an altered obviate or some dream magic to help her rebuild . i don't intend to be cruel. sorry if i come off that way.

aw, severus needs love! this chapter was really sweet! i love this story! update soon!

AWWW That is so sweet. As much as I love Severus sometimes I wish he wasnt so grumpy and snarky about his past. She just went through a big tramua of course seeing the Dark Mark is going to be a little upsetting. But Great new chapter cant wait for more.

Excellent. I am glad that Hermione is keeping the baby. I can't wait to read more soon to see how she and Severus act towards each others now.

I like it. Pleae update soon.

hehe I try to review the story in its entirety at the end, but this chapter just had me to tears... I love rain.

I like it. Please update soon.

Found a minor flub ... In the part with Mr. Finnegan, you wrote: 'Hermione could see that the boy was getting angry. Silently she chuckled at the memories of losing herself getting caught.' The second line doesn't make sense. Also, at the end of that paragraph, you didn't capitalize Mr. Filch's name.

Sharing a bathroom! Oh yuck! :( I hate bathrooms with two doors. Always feel like someone's going to barge in.

I rarely review on this site, but this is one of my favorite stories in a long time!! I love the updates and the story itsself - I'm NOT a Ron fan. LOL

I simoply love this story! I check back several times a day to see if it's been updated. It's so nice to read a new chapter before bed, and then wake up to find another one! :)

Brilliant work!

-Sari