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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

person Citten
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha. i sorry but that was funny. :) i have never been one for wresling, but it was fun to have severus reaction. and that he was able to deal with hermione laughting. well now they have a new kettle of fish to deal with now, so what will happen. please update and let us know.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I, fortunately, have the same attitude as Snape regarding Wrestling. I used to like it, but the dramatics have gotten to thearatical for me. I miss the wrestling of old...sigh. Anyhow...poor Ron, 80 years with Nott and McNair??? Man, if only the real world would punish sexual violators in such a manner, there'd be no sexual assult in the world.

Red
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione, walking in on Severus. I hope they can both manage to be around each other after this with being embarassed about it. I loved his reaction to the wrestling. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Delfin
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww nice! =D

waiting for next chap =)
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww, i bet that was a hard chapter to write, but you did awesome!!!
I love this severus snape who stands by hermione and is so careful around her!
Thank you for writing this, i love it, please update soon! :)

Jocy
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. Poor Hermione having to relive her attack. I am glad though that the Weasley's now know exactly what Ron did to Hermione on her birthday no less. I loved how Severus told Hermione that she belongs with him. I hope that she will allow him to get closer and then they can begin a true relationship. He knows not to rush things because she is still healing. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I am glad that Severus is being cautious with Hermione. She is still somewhat traumatized and doesn't need to rush into things. I hope she continues to spend time with him and learns occlumency. I can't wait to read more soon.
person chyara
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such a powerful story.... I've been reading it with tears in my eyes.

update soon please.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a wonderful job!