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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

person Angie30
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, lol Guess old Malfoy isn't going to try and mess with Hermione anymore when he finds out what she did to him. *Giggles* Look forward to an update.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like an interesting story but there's a lot of character background missing here. They just do things without much of an explanation. Why does Ron rape Hermione? Was he violent to her before? Is he a violent drunk? What? And Harry, shouldn't he be surprised at finding his best friend raped Hermione? If not, does that mean he knows Ron is that way? But then why doesn't he think about it, blame himself for not doing anything? Similarly, why does Snape get attached to Hermione? They're not strangers. He knows her well. Her abilities shouldn't surprise him. Well this could work out but he still needs more insight into how Hermione's image changes for him or if he always had special feelings for her.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I am glad that she is trying to get Ronald's rights to the baby taken away. I hope that Molly doesn't try to stop Hermione from doing what she feels is right. I am also glad that she agreed to go out with Severus. I think he would make a wonderful father to her little girl. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!@! severus naked!! yum.....poor hermoine, lol, she's gonna have dirty dreams. lol. update soon!
person Delfin
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww on a date, that's so sweet :)

cant wait to read more
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story. I am reading it on my cell at work when we're slow and started laughing about the ultrasound, i could stop laughing long enough to explain myself. That was the same reaction i had 'thats going where?!' I love this story you are a great author.
person laica
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it trully do please update soon
person Myrna
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Dancing on my chaiR*
:)
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think hermione should get a court order that forbids molly and the rest of the family from seeing the baby once it is born. because with the way molly is she would fill that kid's head with how great ron was.