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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person MrsDeLay
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its about time he finally told her! I love this story, please keep up the great work!!
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was about to go to bed and decided to stop here and check if there were any updates to my favorite stories...and here we go, the one story i have been most anxious to read! THANK YOU!!! And what a lovely chapter! I cant wait to read more i cant wait to see how this develops, how Hermione loses some of her fear and how severus will deal with a weasley brat ;)
Love your story, truly!
Thank you
Jocy
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYAY! YAYAY! WOOT! I am so happy! More please! I am glad Severus had enough sense to tell her!
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW That is so sweet
person MacBeth
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I was so happy when I saw you had updated. Another great chapter. I love that you're not rushing into the sex but there's still enough tension to make it interesting.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is fluffier than all the tumble dryer fluff in the UK! But I love it! It's great how the two of them are coming together and building their relationship in increments at a believable pace. As well as the fluff there is angst, drama and bucket loads of emotion that pour out of the screen in waves. I can't wait for the next installment of this gripping work.
Blessings
Amethystique x
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A person could get whiplash from this chapter. Cringing at the classic snarky bastard that Sev is with Harry and whipped into mush over the love starved romantic that Severus can be ... all thanks to you;-) [Well, Sev helped.]
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um... I do not think of specific days as holidays, and I'm just wondering if Severus is actually aware that the 14th would be Valentine's Day or just an open day on his calendar! I know I said before that he can be romantic, but in his own way, not in any commercial sense. And we all know what he thinks of Valentine's Day.
person Delfin
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rawr ;)

this story just keeps getting better :)