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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

person smmz79
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so i started reading your blind date story and i really like it so i had to come over here and read your other story as well i love draco and hermione they are my fave but snape and hermione are my second... i love ms figg and i have to say that i LOVE this story i love how you hae written hermione and severus both and honestly i actually like a bad ron at times... I just have to say a dragon tattoo on the back is SOOOO SEXY!!!!! nice job!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am laughing so hard severus snape at a professional wrestling match... i love it that was great... and a little peep
person smmz79
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i have tears in my eyes that was a great chap!!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap... and a great story!!!! i can not wait for your updates to your newest story!!!!! great job!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person carha
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute story. I love the name you chose for her daughter. It suits her personality very well.
person marcia
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story my dear. I can't believe you were nice enough to let them have uninterupted sex after that baby was born. Anyway good job.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its so cute. i loved ur story. i read it all. yay for u. *gives cookie*
person Tenar10r
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! This has been a great story. :)
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kimberley, I know you finished this fic a while ago, but I am ashamed to say I have only just had the pleasure of reading it. I thought it was beautiful nevertheless. I was sickened to feel a sort of remorse to Ron when he was sentenced to so many years after having no clue as he was so drunk, but then I came to my senses and thought no, at the time he would have realised what he was doing and could of stopped himself! I loved Severus, and yes you did an excellent job of keeping him in character, and they had a little boy as well as their daughter, that was really sweet!!!! Hope you write many more fic's as good as this, and look after yourself, I hope the rest of your pregnancy is comfortable!!! luv Ang xx