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for I was his

by kerri240879

person Utopia
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... where shall I start a review of this MASTERPIECE?

Firstly, your writing style is so personal; its as if Hermione is talking to someone, telling them about this little snippet of her life. I have the image of an older Hermione telling her son
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snif! Oh goodness, haven't read such a beautifully written story in like ages!
It's brilliant, simply brilliant. Sooooo sweet, snifsnif!!!
Can you send me a carbon copy of that Draco by e-mail, please? I want one like that, too...
person MB3
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this story and its companion piece and must say that you totally blew me away. Both works of writing were absolutely beautiful. I loved them a lot. They were exactly what I needed to read today; a nice romance fic with a happy ending. And the contrast between the two was amazing. You were able to take the same story and tell it from two different points of view with amazing clarity. I hope you keep writing and look forward to reading any further stories you write. It is not often I find something of this quality. You and your beta did a fabulous job. Congrats to both of you.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like these two stories. I'm really gald to get the chance to read Hermione's pov.
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe i loved it!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was nice! it made me cry.. hehehe i love how you wrote it in Hermione's view. it made me feel how she felt! im not usually in favor of one-shots but i love this!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you wrote this. I LOVE Draco's version "She was mine" and this is the perfect companion to that...now it really is complete.

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