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by reirei

person jan
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is getting interesting... Keep it up, I can't wait to read more.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rei, this is the hottest story you've written yet. True story. I've never been too keen on Lucius and Draco double action, but now I'm gonna have fantasies for weeks off of that last chapter. That was so fucking hot...you've have to got have the sexiest mind I've encountered in a long long while. This is my new favorite Rei story....well, I can't say that until it's finished, but it's a contender. Whatever your muse for this story is, keep it/him very happy because I need more of that!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, can't wait for more. the food scene was hott
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Hermione fruit platter was sexier than sin, but I would have enjoyed it much more if it was only Draco eating off her. I admit that reading Lucius take her was less icky than I thought it would be because Hermione gave the impression of wanting him. I like the comparison you made between Lucius and a romance novel character. The revelation that both Narcissa and Hermione read Gothic romances was interesting too. Draco's pain for Hermione's predicament and his resolve to not become his father were both nice emotional touchstones for this chapter.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first , grongatulations with your upcomming birthday and on the story really hot!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!happy early birthday!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do like it and I am seriously looking forward to what happens next. One question though, how the hell do you manage to write so many different stories at once? I think my brain would explode!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great start. I am looking forward to more!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY FUCKING BIRTHDAY REI!!!

This story is gonna be so fucking hot...I have to put you on a limit. You cannot make me wet more than twice a day..now that you're working on umpteen million stories, I think you're breaking that rule and I'm gonna have to regulate some punishment on ya. I love this concept...anything with Lucius, Hermione AND my boy Draco cant go wrong especially if Hermione has to take a little punishment to get Draco where we want him to be, in her arms.


:::raising my wine glass to your special day::::: hope you have many more with lots more nasty fics to go with them : )
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's only the first chapter and this is already my favorite of your fics. :) Please update soon!