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for The Fortunate Fall

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is one of your best!
person staar
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one !!!!!!!!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmhmm. Very nice indeed. I particularly enjoyed this quote: "What
person Diane
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it and hate it at the same time. That's a work of genius the way you have Draco rising up from how low he'd fallen because of his face and the loss of his wand. I can see how that would crush someone with so much pride and so much focus on his status would crash like Draco does. I also love the metaphor with the angels and how Harry so gently brings them both up until they bloom. At the same time, I hate it because it doesn't feel finished. And then, just to make myself sound more crazy, I love that at the same time because it shows just how unimportant Draco's revenge is now. So there's your confusing review. That's what you get for writing a brilliant story.
person Anabel
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfect loving story. I am going to read this one again and again.
person evalhanne
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty interesting. It leaves room for a sequel but doesn't necessarily need one. Awesome.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that final image of quiet strength that both Draco and Harry possess in that final scene - and I also really like that you didn't solve the mystery of who harmed Draco initially. It's not necessary for his growth as a person and his overall confidence, and I just... really approve of that. Great job!
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo loved this!
person NightLo
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful, and I especially love how you handle the public pressure for the two - as that would be a constant source of unease...not to forget the way that Draco and Harry find their meaning and lives they desire...

Actually just like presidents, prime minsters, governors or stars and prize-winners, they are also humans, they have normality, that's why I love this much...

Though the culprit is unknown, still the faith and trust that the two share would last long...and unaffected them any bit!!! Thanks for it...

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe poor draco but great story!