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for Hard Time

by Juwel

person megan
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!

This has gone on my list as one of my favorite harry/draco fic.

:D

update soon!
person QueenB
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 16 I was worried and angry, too, when Draco seized Harry's wand. But I was more angry at Harry than Draco. That's the sort of thing you'd expect from him. However, you'd think that all the time Harry spent in danger and the lessons and training against the day he'd be fighting Voldemort would have taught him to be more careful about his weapons. Sheesh!

It was good to see Hermione be the voice of reason here. She always comes off as the most level-headed one; sometimes it's difficult to picture her in love. (I'd better get started on reading the books.)

Who wouldn't stare at Cedric Diggory? I saw a few clips from the movies...tall, dark, handsome and cheekbones to die for. He looked like Superman without the cape. Arrrrrrr... >:P~~~
person megan
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cliff hanger grrr!!


ohwell

hmm.
i wonder why draco did that.

update soon!!
person Leentjef
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. I hope there will be more, and soon.
person QueenB
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15 I'm glad Draco initiated the actions in this chapter. After being made the helpless plaything of others, being able to dictate how events should proceed is exactly what he needed. However, I would prefer to having Harry be the dominant one sometimes, if only to show Draco that it needn't be frightening or painful to be the bottom or submit to another.

Draco's character and thoughts are perfectly delineated here, showing that his arrogant spirit nor his need to prove himself in control haven't been entirely doused. Thanks for this convincing addition.
person megan
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AMAZINGG

cant wait for the next chapter.

i hope that things between harry and draco will heat up soon.
^_^

update soon!

person kittycat30
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I know, impatient. Great story!
person Leentjef
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very very goos story keep going and post soon
bye bye