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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i didnt realise there was more than one chapter!
hi fucking 5 on the whole fangs thing!
and rocky horror was soooo perfect!
you are really good at it!
and incorporating the cruciaroused was hot.
and the dungeon ... oh god !
xxx
hi fucking 5 on the whole fangs thing!
and rocky horror was soooo perfect!
you are really good at it!
and incorporating the cruciaroused was hot.
and the dungeon ... oh god !
xxx
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good !
i really liked it!
i really liked it!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!!
I really hope that you get the chance to update again and soon!
Good Top!Harry fics are hard to come by.....
I really hope that you get the chance to update again and soon!
Good Top!Harry fics are hard to come by.....
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... yummy! More, please! Harder, faster, um, yeah. ;) Actually, to b just a teensy bit more practical, I like that the characters have some substance to them. A little more of an omniscient perspective (i.e., hearing the character's thoughts) might enhance the story in that regard.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is fucking hot.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo hot. ILY <3 I would ask you if you would marry me but my girlfriend said I had to stop doing that because it makes her jealous. You can have a cookie though. *holds out cookie* Please write more soon!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Your ending feels too abrupt as if part of it were cut off. If Pansy is so intent on seducing Draco, why would she be sanguine about his rejection? And if some guy bumped me on my ass to the floor, I'd be more than a little ticked off. I haven't read many of the HP novels so I don't know Pansy's character. Is the girl some sort of doormat? No wonder no one would want her. >:(