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for The Secret's in the Sauce

by LadyTuesday

schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was rather hot and naughty. Well done. Can't wait to see where this goes!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is such a different and interesting story. not to mention hot!! lol update soon! please!
person ElenSila
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delightful masturbation scene. Absolutely delightful. I like all your descriptions of the differences between the potions etc., and that Snape has to be told to remove his clothes. I don't quite see why making a complicated potion everyday is better than a one-time boink, but they're silly, stubborn people.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT was hot!
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it's going to be very good!
person reirei
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I find this story intriguing and I want more!!! Good job.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao! Wkd! That fits so well with the challenge! Well done you, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Please update soon?!
V xxx
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chappie. I can't wait to read more-it better be soon!! I love the idea of the challenge also...are there any more entries to this challenge...I've search on WIKTT, but I can't even find the challenge.
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh... do update! I can't wait!