rate_review Reviews

Hey Hun great Story so far! I think the reason you haven't had so many hits is because of your summary. Here are a couple I thought up for this great beginning.
" Draco is desperate. His mother is in danger and he can't help her. He knows who can, the question is...will he? And at what price?"

"Desperate, Draco dares to risk it all. To save his mother, he pledged himself, all he is to Harry. 2 years later he escapes from Hell desperate to find Harry to fulfil his pledge. Problem is, he's not all there... Meanwhile in Hell, the demons are stirring...they want Draco back."

I think with an intro like that, you should get more hits.

If the second one doesn't fit completely you can remove the last sentence or two.

I hope you update soon because I want to read what happens. Please email me when you have updated the story. If you need someone to bounce ideas off if, I can do that too. :)

Hope to hear from you soon!

N

Sooo need chapter 3! Poor Draco! He's like a child! How ever did he escape?

Who is the other man? What happened to Draco? Soooo need chapter 2!

Hello! I wanted to review here too! Awesme fic! Once again update soon!

We need another installment please. I hope it will drawtogether the two disparate pieces.

i loved it and poor draco. what happened after that night and w/draco up to the 4year point. ooh and loved voldie in his head too!