rate_review Reviews

I liked this. It was definitely different but very good all the same. You are going to be updating soon, yes?

It was good. The story itself was interesting, I like the idea of Voldemort taking advantage of the situation likte that. I'm not sure that the Malfoys would be so sympathetic, but then again, we know little of their true natures from the books. Anyway, I love it, write more soon!

Cool. I hope that Voldemort really falls for him, and that Sirius and Remus join the dark side. This story is off to a really good start, very descriptive. How old does Voldemort appear, though? Does Severus ever start to accept Harry? Does Harry ever gain back his memories, and if so, does he remain with Voldemort? so many questions, they can only be answered by updating! update soon please!

Very very nice. I like this a lot. As much as I will regret saying this dont you think that the smutr between Harry and Voldemort is going too fast. Even if he doesnt remember somewhere in is subconcious he still does and he will be afraid to have sex no matter how sexy Voldemort is. XDDDD

Update again soon

This story is messed up. :P


That said, I just want to point out my favorite part: Petunia and Dudley attempting to stick up and protect Harry from Vernon and Petunia's later regrets at Harry's mistreatment. Most stories like to dehumanize these characters and keep them strickly one-dimentional evil abusers. I like that you've made them real and believable. Keep up the good work.

I'm sorry, hon, but this is really poorly executed. None of the dialog or characterization is believable. I don't want to make you feel bad, this is not my intention, but why are these people there? Harry called them? Why would Harry call them? Why would they be fawning over him? How did Vernon find out about Petunia? And Petunia is now a witch? I think the missing punctuation and dialog needs work. The idea is good, I'd like to see you execute it the way I'm sure you can. If you're going to make characters act OOC or different, you need to explain why, and you need to do it believably. Of course this is my opinion, and others may like it, but I'm sure you have it in you to polish this up. You're a good story teller and that's a great beginning, just follow it up by learning from mistakes and do not take this as a flame.

Please do continue... I love to read more.
Great fic and cant wait to see what you have in-stored next.

Bloody hell Lilith! Your a fantastic writer.

Only one chapter and I am already hooked.

Please update chapter 2 ASAP!!! PLEASE!!! ^_^