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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated! I love this story, the idea of Harry going after a muggle profession is so original..everyone else puts him in the ministry of magic. it makes a nice change i think i like it this way better. And you get mad props for making it realistic but not having anyone die. thats hard to pull off.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolute and totally love this story! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, and see what's Harry reaction going to be when he finds out that Draco's son is also his son &_&
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
Jan
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! i was planning to do a chapter-by-chapter review but decided on just compiling because i could not stop myself from clicking the 'next chapter' link after each chapter. this fic is really nice. the plot is new, the context is fresh, the characters are well-written.
the first chapter was high on emotion as well as action. i could really feel the angst, the passion, the frustration, the confusion. it was a well written prologue that not just explained the context, but the emotional stance of the characters for each other as well.
the next chapter was a nice way to bring them back together again. their meeting wasn't one of the cliches where they just bump into each other and fall back into each others arm. the suspense was nicely built up. the jargon was also very realistic.
the third chapter was great. emotions and adrenaline were running high. the fire scene was so vivid that imagining it was no problem. harry's and draco's desperation, albeit for completely different reasons, were so tangible. i almost laughed at harry's thoughts of pansy. almost. i could not because the chapter was just too intense. the hospital scene got me sitting at the edge of my seat. it was so bittersweet. i love not only that they stayed true to their love for each other but also that they did not suddenly throw themselves at each other.
now i'm confused. the second chapter mentioned two children, both under age of two. draco only mentioned a son. who's the other kid? i also noticed (or did i miss it?) that it wasn't mentioned that draco did marry pansy. sure, the second chapter mentioned their impending nuptials, but i'm puzzled as to whether they really got married. also, is draco in the muggle world? why? who are the other people with him in the fire?
Gah!! i know i've got a lot of questions. and i probably should not be asking things when i should be complimenting you on your superb writing. i'll conclude my review by saying that if i could describe your fic in one sentence it would be: good characterizations coupled with a great plot. good luck and more inspiration to your writing! looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
the first chapter was high on emotion as well as action. i could really feel the angst, the passion, the frustration, the confusion. it was a well written prologue that not just explained the context, but the emotional stance of the characters for each other as well.
the next chapter was a nice way to bring them back together again. their meeting wasn't one of the cliches where they just bump into each other and fall back into each others arm. the suspense was nicely built up. the jargon was also very realistic.
the third chapter was great. emotions and adrenaline were running high. the fire scene was so vivid that imagining it was no problem. harry's and draco's desperation, albeit for completely different reasons, were so tangible. i almost laughed at harry's thoughts of pansy. almost. i could not because the chapter was just too intense. the hospital scene got me sitting at the edge of my seat. it was so bittersweet. i love not only that they stayed true to their love for each other but also that they did not suddenly throw themselves at each other.
now i'm confused. the second chapter mentioned two children, both under age of two. draco only mentioned a son. who's the other kid? i also noticed (or did i miss it?) that it wasn't mentioned that draco did marry pansy. sure, the second chapter mentioned their impending nuptials, but i'm puzzled as to whether they really got married. also, is draco in the muggle world? why? who are the other people with him in the fire?
Gah!! i know i've got a lot of questions. and i probably should not be asking things when i should be complimenting you on your superb writing. i'll conclude my review by saying that if i could describe your fic in one sentence it would be: good characterizations coupled with a great plot. good luck and more inspiration to your writing! looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! That's the best Easter present I've gotten this year. *huggles* Harry's so sweet it's to die for. I hope the next chapter won't take so long and you got all your problems satisfactorily solved. (^_
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my gosh you absolutely must continue this, I can't wait to read more!! I love it!
Harry's a big strong fireman hey hey??? So sexy and cute, and OMG I can't believe Draco and Harry's son were in the flames and Harry doesn't know that the baby was his son!
I'm actually looking forward to seeing his fireman mate's reactions to what happened. Like yeah he was a stupid prat for going in alone to rescue them, and surely they're going to want to know what made him do it. What will Harry say? Will he admit to knowing Draco? Knowing him in a more intimate way? We'll just have to wait and see what you cook up.
Can't wait for an update!
~gorgeousbowneyes
Harry's a big strong fireman hey hey??? So sexy and cute, and OMG I can't believe Draco and Harry's son were in the flames and Harry doesn't know that the baby was his son!
I'm actually looking forward to seeing his fireman mate's reactions to what happened. Like yeah he was a stupid prat for going in alone to rescue them, and surely they're going to want to know what made him do it. What will Harry say? Will he admit to knowing Draco? Knowing him in a more intimate way? We'll just have to wait and see what you cook up.
Can't wait for an update!
~gorgeousbowneyes
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!! Harry missed an important piece of the puzzle!
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you updated this fic! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! I have been waiting ages for this. I thought that you'd forgotten about it.
This chapter was fantastic! Hurry up with more please ASAP!
This chapter was fantastic! Hurry up with more please ASAP!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg hes alive so want more!!!!please!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. MMmmmmmm Fire Man Harry, definitely something to contemplate, but besides that, the writing is also really good, good plot development, good characterization, and nice dynamic. If there is a mailing list for this story I would like to be added for it, my email address is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue! holy shit you need to continue or i'll DIE! O_O