rate_review Reviews

I think this story will be great, I really like the concept, I have a few questions though. Who is Adrian? Is it Harry? If it was a name change was it on purpose? Also the chapter started out awsome great detail and shifting of moods but as you got towards the end it seemed rushed like you couldn't wait to get it done.

Interesting, but I am having trouble following this. Who is Adrian?

oooooh i like!

omg sweet!