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i loved it!

omg hot smut!

Wow that's hot hot hot! You have o continue on wth this work! I'd love to see what Harry and Ron's reaction is when they find out Malfoy and Hermione are gettin' it on! You write really well, but just a constructive bit of criticism you were a bit light on in the full stops and grammar stakes particularly in the secons chapter so maybe run a grammar filter over your work before you publish the third chapter.

Good stuff!