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for Dreams/ The Morning After

by AshaVincent

person Riley
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
was good.
shame it ended after only 2 chapters.
but itleaves you with a sense of contentment,
person wudelfin
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very romantic
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute i love!
person luvhp
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, dreams can come true!!! :)
Great work.
person miakitty
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it so much.why not make a sequel?? i will more than gladly to read it
person KBowman
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice oneshot - the sex was good, and the language was at the right level with the speech. The only thing that jarred was the overuse of the word 'baby' - I know they were being affectionate but it sounded a bit fake. Otherwise, very nice fic, probably would have worked set when they were at school even :) I've always preferred Nasty!Draco but yours was sensitive without being too soppy!
person wudelfin
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the after glow must be incredible...
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hott and cute! id love for it to continue but u probably wont :(.