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by lucyespinosa88

schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice ! didnt see that ending coming.
your really talented.
person KBowman
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would have liked to see more of this so I'll look out for the whole story it's a flashback from! There's a whole vein of 'Harry Potter gets his kicks out of torture' here and I like the way you write it as well - it's not good, it's not clean, it's dirty and wrong and he knows it but he can't help himself. Nice :)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was hot!