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by ScorpioPhoenix

schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was sooooo hot! You have got to continue with this story, it's bloody fantastic!
person freelancer360
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, how did I miss chapter 3?!?! GRRR I've been waiting for an update and all along you HAD updated! Anyways that was fun, raunchy dessert ;)

Now to this chapter.

YOU ARE EVIL!!!! Pure and utter evil! Leaving it off like that...getting me all into it and building it up and then just stopping!!! I can't wait to see them together...Mhmm it's just hot thinking about it. Anyways update SOON!!! PLEASE?!?! Oh and as much as I am loving the flashbacks, I also can't wait to see what happens in the present. Draco should get wise and leave his wife and live happily ever after with his obsession. GOOD JOB!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry slept with Ernie again? Draco with both Pansy and Blaise? Ginny seems to be taking it well. *smirk* Will she walk away? That's what Draco is hoping. Why was Harry going to end it anyway?
person CrAzEd-YaOi-LuVeR
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAWD!!!!!! Don't you dare stop writing this, I.. .. ..Holy Crap!! I can't think of anything wrong with it besides the fact that it isn't finished and I have to suffer in anticipation for the end. Christ, whe nis Harry to f*ck Malfoy? HURRY HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!




person ZooArmy
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You make this all up without a plot? WOW *bows deeply*
I'm really happy for you that your story's a success. *tehe* Huggles and cookies
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my :x


instant gratification... now thats magic! :D hehehe ^^

Another great couple of chapters. Keep up the good work. <3
person Dadella
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really turning into something rather nice...

the food scene in chapter three?

fuck...

(as in, HOT)
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg cool trick!
person shevien
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you tease! But I love you for it, it just makes the outcome all the more satisfying:]
I love how Draco thought that Harry had better been attracted because he was
"the ultimate man" (he's SO modest-lol) The chapter was smoking, can't wait for 4!
person JBlake
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a sucker for angst, and cliffhangers though so can be quite deadly, like this last one. Draco and Harry's relationship seems so tangled but I love it. I especially liked the ice cream scene.

But poor Blaise, even though I wish he would just get over Draco already. But I'm sure that's next to impossible and I wouldn't blame him. I'm just curious as to how this will all work out. I'm anxious to see how Harry and Ginny work out, though I never really liked their pairing to begin with. Part of me wants everything to work out but then again... Draco and Harry are just too perfect for each other.

And how will Ron handle it if Ginny decides to say anything? We all know he has a temper and I'm sure Harry is no exception to that. I can't wait for more.

This story is delicious.

-Jay