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Sooo need chapter 8!!! I'm hoping Harry gives into Draco!

Hey! This chapter is good what the heck are you talking about? (BTW, long live SDL!)

So plot? I don't know. I guess you could have Harry listen to what Draco has to say, toy with him a bit then leave him high and dry. Ginny takes him back but Draco still pursues Harry. And ofcourse there is Blaise. For some reason Ginny goes missing and Harry thinks it Draco goes over and raises hell. Afterwards he finally realise that Draco is innocent and for some reason he needs his help and Harry, Draco Ron and Ernie start on the case. Drama ensues... *shrug* I've got no clue.

How can you hate this chapter? I loved it! So wonderful...I hope Draco and Harry can figure something out and I'm oh sooo curious to see how their little purely sex relationship turns into more. Hehe I love this story! Update soon!!!!

This chapter didn't suck I dont know what you are talking about! It was bloody brilliant, just like all the others. This story is riveting, don't give up on it!

For a hint for the rest of the story, to get you going;

If I were Draco, I'd let the Wesalette know about all Harrys affairs with Ernie, and possibly others. Everything there is to know. Use an investagator. I'd also let her know that Ron knew all along about his antics thus killing two birds with one stone. Of course Draco would do this without getting caught by having someone else leak her the info or send an annonymous owl, etc.

Draco should play the Jealousy card with Harry. Piss Harry off by waving a date under his nose of worse comes to worse. Maybe go to the same place Harry and the Wesalette will be. While making him jealous, someone could leak the info to the Wesalette in the girls loo, etc. She leaves him high and dry while he has to watch Draco with another man.

Harry it seems, wants his cake and eat it too. He never sees any wrong he does, only others. Rules only apply to him when they are convenient. I would set the story so that Draco breaks him of this, and ends up with the prize. A final showdown between Harry and Blaize would be a good one to include. Pansy also needs a lesson about not putting her nose where it don't belong.

Draco however will have to do something about his wife. Promise to never sleep with her or something. Have a kid by artificial insemination, etc. Then soon as the kid is born, divorce her.

There's many ways this story could go, I'd finish it if I were you. It's good.

I actually don't think it is a bad chapter at all. It is a little meandering, but otherwise, still keeps the story moving. I think we need to definitely hear the conversation between Draco and Harry (hopefully one of honesty and reconciliation). We also need Ginny to come back into the picture for a moment to help close off that chapter. I think the conversation between Pansy and Draco helps to clarify why Harry could never marry Ginny and live an honest life if he did. He is in love with Draco. It would also be helpful if during a "flashback" we saw Harry fall in love with Draco, a moment when both their pretenses fall, even for a moment, and they see each other for real.

Just some ideas. I think you are doing fine, and I like this story. I hope you don't scrap it.

man, i don't know if i can live through seeing harry and ginny get back together if the same chapter doesn't end with harry going with draco in the present day storyline. The part about draco cradling the stupefied harry was heartbreaking. The entire time i'm reading the chapter, I'm hoping draco would just say he's getting a divorce, just so i can see harry leave ginny and be with draco again.

I love how Harry was clueless about Draco's silent anguish (even though I wanted to smak him). And of course I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to Draco stunning him though!. Angry, sexual tension-filled Harry is a Harry i can forgive! Now alot of dynamics are revealed and we got a glimpse of how their relationship must have been over the years. (Draco subtle manipulation and Harry's near obliviousness to Draco as one with actual feelings. And yet they are a comfort to each other.)Your Harry and Draco's interactions are always fascinating to read.
(I always love your Harry's; he so hot!) Plus, smoking smex scene ^_~

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Oh my god, Scorpio...YOU UPDATED!!!!! I'm so glad you updated!!!!

I LOVE THIS!!! I cried when Harry and Draco were talking...and when Harry was going to leave and Draco was trying to stop him!!!!!!! I was like "Harry, can't you just fucking get over yourself and admit that you love Draco back!!! Fuck Ginny! Fuck Felice!!! You two belong together, damn you stupid Gryffindor!!!!"

and then Pansy started in on him and I was like "GO PANSY YES I LOVE YOU GO BITCH GO"

"Draco deserves better than you." Well-said, and I really like the way she is sticking up for Draco. I wish I could write her like that, but after DH...I just can't...(or at least I haven't, really) Someone needs to fucking bash Harry over the head with how much he's killing Draco!!!!! GO PANSY GO

*gasp* There's something Harry doesn't know!!!!! Draco's keeping something from Harry!!!!! WHAT IS IT?!?!?!?! Pansy knows!!!!! It's about Lucius, isn't it? Is it that he's dead? Does Harry know that? Wouldnt' that be in the prophet?????? WHAT??!?!??!!??!??!!??!?! I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Little boy lost" I died!!!!!!! *dies* POOR DRACO!!! MY BABY!!!!!!! *sobs*

Oh. My. God. The sex. I forgot how to type. You'll have to get Harry to interpret this, since he's amazing at understanding incoherence

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Yeah...that about sums it up! You are fucking incredible, and I love this!!! MORE MORE MORE

omg is all i gotta say....update also comes to mind thouhg :-P