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by ScorpioPhoenix

schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please finish it
person jami_lee
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! I have to know how it ends.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update. brilliant!!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this, would die for an update.
person n0c
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i read this all in one go, so excuse my lack of reviews! keep me up all night, and now it's 11:00am. anyway, great portrayal of characters. i like how harry seems more in control, but also the fire to draco's ice at the same time. the sex scenes are good too ^^ the scenes from the past are more interesting than the present though, and i can kinda see how you're stuck. sorry i can't give any suggestions.. but i do hope you won't scrape this fic!! i'm enjoying it very much. and as much as i secretly love the whole nonchalant harry and increasingly desperate draco moments... i can't wait for when harry finally reciprocates draco's feelings or as least admits them. your fic had me giggling many times. i especially like the scene where teddy turns into mini harry ^^ also harry and draco's first sexual encounter had me literally laughing out loud [the part where draco's spitting out cum and cumming at the same time.. i'm chuckling right now thinking about it] anyway, your work is great, and i hope to read more soon! sorry if my long, rambling review made no sense at all.. i blame the lack of sleep!
person meEksiNs
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have my vote of 5IVE BLOODY STARS for this fic! explosive harry and a 'soothing' draco - an explosive relationship.. i have absolutely no idea WHY u dont have more hits which u deserve for this fic.

U R NOT NOT DISCONTINUING THIS FIC ARE YOU??!!!

i wanna what happens to this two in the end! gawd!
person Luvdonite
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update this story soon. it's so wonderful.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
still waiting patiently for an update! I hope you havent given up on this story..I check it all the time! Keep up with it! Its a really good story :)
person YG
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Draco can make Harry see reason ;_; and that he realices he wasn't perfect either... They love each other too much to let go ;_; *sniff*
person YG
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hum... and for some plot... well, they could talk and argue and fight... and then snog, but harry leaves, scared of what he can't control, but when he reaches home he can't stop thinking and goes back to Draco, who is desolated, and then they have hot sex. What harry didn't realice when he left is that Ginny had come back and she saw him flooing to Draco's place. Harry stays the night, he and Draco talk after making ssweet tender love. Harry goes back to his house and finds Ginny waiting for him in front of the floo place, and Draco appears 5 minutes later to hand him his clothes, Harry hadn't realized he had Draco's clothe's on... More bunny plots? ^^ I hope you update soon =) kiss