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Well, Draco's hard shell cracked a little at seeing Hermione's continuing grief, and that's a good thing. Hermione should be able to lock her bedroom door. That will just be an open invitation to a certain blond Slytherin (heehee). On one hand, this beauty potion is going to be trouble for Hermione, but on the other, it may help solidify the attentions of that blond Slytherin (heehee and Goody!!!); however, I don't like the idea of Draco using magic to enhance his appearance. It ruins the fantasy. Shame on you for doing that. Neville's remark about Snape was cute.

Even if he was under the spell, the tenderness Draco showed Hermione while he claimed her maidenhead was delicious. Dang it all for Snape meddling, and dang Pansy for just breathing much less bringing a swift halt to the Draco/Hermione lovin'. I'd like to hex both Snape and Pansy for that.

Draco had two wonderful lines in this chapter. The first was asking for permission to kiss Hermione again, and then, lapping her cunny instead of a real kiss (Sigh!!! YUMMY!!!). The second was his amusing quote about how Hermione "boxes like an Amazon" (chuckle).

I also have a question, or rather I need a clarification. If the potion was given to Draco by his mother to give to Snape, and Draco hid it; then, does that mean he didn't use it himself? I read it like he was just putting it in safekeeping until he could pass it off to Snape and didn't actually use it himself. I may be wrong, and I'm sorry about the question, but I'm a bit unclear on this point. Any light you can shed on this would be appreciated. Thanks!!!

Another good chapter ReiRei.

I LOVE the idea of another truth telling potion. I LOVE Draco's statement about Hermione being better sexually than Pansy, and I LOVE Hermione's fear of being "ruined for other men" after having had Draco first. The former quote is amusing; the latter qoute is sexy. However, Draco making love to Hermione after casting the silencio on both of them is the sexiest aspect of this chapter as well as my favorite moment in the fic so far. The raw emotion and bare to the bones honesty in that scene were wonderful. Ironically, it seemed they were more truthful with each other when they couldn't speak than when they could. Go figure.

IMO, this was the best chapter of this fic to date.

IF YOUR ONLY GOING TO HAVE TWO FRIENDS LEFT IN THE WORLD WHO BETTER THAN DRACO AND BLAISE?I LOVED THE CHAPTERS THAY KEEP GETING BETTER EVERY TIME YOU WRITE.POOR SEVERUS THOUGH I THINK DRACO IS GOING TO GIVE HIM A HEADACHE.CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

First of all, I would like to applaud you for using a canon version of Blaise rather than the more popular fanon Italian version of him. I don't mind the Italian version if the fic pre-dates Half-Blood Prince where Blaise was finally established as a tall and good looking black boy (I assume British like the rest of them) with high cheekbones. In those earlier fics, writers were just guessing and trying to give the character an identity, and we didn't know any better. Now we do, and the canon version should be the preferred version, but alas the fanon version still persists in newer fics. Personally, I always picture Blaise Zabini as a younger version of Colin Salmon. He is a YUMMY looking black British actor who played MI5 agent Charles Robinson in 3 Pierce Brosnan James Bond films. They were Tomorrow Never Dies, The World is Not Enough, and Die Another Day. This actor is tall and good looking with high cheekbones too. If he were younger, he would make a perfect Blaise. But, I digress.

Now, I will discuss what I thought of this chapter. Ginny was REALLY annoying, but I LOVE Hermione's reply about "sleeping" with Draco to bring him over to the light side. I'm hoping that she plans to do this with Blaise too. I noticed the F/M/M warning, and I HOPE that means a Draco/Hermione/Blaise menage. To my knowledge, you haven't written one of those yet. And it seemed that you were setting it up in this chapter with both boys promising to protect her. I believe Draco was sincere in his promise whereas Blaise most certainly was playing Hermione, but he can always change, and I've got my fingers crossed that he does so. Also, Hermione shouldn't give up on her friendship with Harry and Ron. They've got their hands full trying to find those horcruxes. I don't think that means that they have deserted her. She should have a little more faith in them, but that could be the grief talking and not her real feelings.

As an aside, I noticed a small error that bears mentioning. You used hippograph, and the creature is a hippogriff. It may just be a typo. But on the off-chance that it isn't, I thought that I would let you know; so, you could correct it.

This was another wonderful chapter, and I must say this is my second favorite of your fics after Soft's Pleasure.

Lastly, I LOVE Blaise comparing Hermione to a Botticelli painting as well as the scene where he discovered the nude Hermione and Draco napping. That was just as steamy as the silencio moment in the previous chapter. I rarely say this, but those two moments tie for the sexiest moment in this fic.

I eagerly await the next installment of this fic.

wow update soon *kisses*

RE-Chapter 4 - AMAZING!!!!! you have got some excellent idea's for this fic, it's gonna be soooo! good!!! I would love to have known what Draco was saying to hermione *bless* xax

Hi ReiRei,
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RE-CHAPTER 5 - Does this mean Draco is not really trying to make Hermione fall for a line?! afterall... if he did say those words while silenced, he was under the veritaserum potion. loving this fic xax

okay now things are getting fun and intersting! more please! :) now will they believe the lie or have hurtful truth or is it the other way around-boy that is confusing. hope that you know what is going on and how things will go and work out cause i am just making myself more confused by the minute. well do update soon and let us know where things are going.