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schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, you are welcome for the reviews. As far as I'm concerned, your creativity makes it easier to review. We readers review; you get more ideas; we review some more, and so it goes. It's a delightfully vicious cycle you see. :) Seriously, good writing like this should be acknowledged.

Yep, this WAS another wonderful angst ridden chapter. I see that Snape is now practicing what he preached. First, he tells Draco to protect Hermione by alienating her. Now, Snape uses the same ploy with Millicent. Goodness knows, I like these two Slytherin men, but I think this little trick will backfire BIG TIME. Their witches aren't the type to sit on the sidelines regardless of how far these wizards are going to go to protect them. As I said, I like Snape and Draco, but about now, I'd like to shake some sense into both of them. They would be better off letting their witches fight by their sides rather than having the girls fighting alone; which, they will undoubtedly do. Grr!!! Men...they must be the most exasperating species on the planet.

Oh, before I forget to say it. Ginny needs to be throttled for blabbing about Hermione's role in this. If Voldy or his Death Eaters hurt any of them, the blame should be placed squarely on her doorstep.

Another excellent chapter, ReiRei. I can't wait for the next one.
person Fallen Star
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove this story!! I can't wait for more!!! I am on the edge of my seat and if I didn't have to go to work I would sit here and just hit refresh untill it said that there was an update!!!!
person luvhp
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Draco does love her. And poor Millicent, to love the bastard Snape is so hard. :)
lovely chapter!!!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa....this is getting thick. You got me feeling bad for Millicent.lol. That's crazy, I usually hate that girl, but this character you've created feels real. I like the angst going on with Snape and her, and I'm really pulling for them now. Snape should have known better than to try to push her away like that, she is a Slytherin after all. This is gonna be interesting...LOL!Draco dissing Ginny. I can't stand that girl. Your Dracos and Blaises are so funny. It's so sweet Draco is depending on his love of Hermione to get him through this...:::sigh::
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shit i want more. wow!!
person Katay
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Snape is following in Dumbledore's footsteps.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a greaat chapter. I am glad that Hermione is with Ron and Harry. I hope that she can help them in their search for the horocruxes. I think Draco should go against Snape though and find a way to tell Hermione the truth about everything. I can't wait to read more.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this one is extra angsty...you got me feeling all bad for everyone, Hermione, Draco, and Ron. Poor things. I hope Ron can find some peace and I hope Draco gets his shall death do them part. I just love how you weave your stories in with canon events, it's not easy to do...looking forward to seeing if Draco can stand staying away from her and pretending like he isn't in love.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope she'll be able to be back with Draco and realize that he cares about her.


Lovely fic. :) keep up the good work.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was another good chapter, and it was filled with heartache all around; although, I am pleased Hermione was sent to Harry and Ron. She doesn't need to be alone. I do feel sorrow for Hermione, Draco, and Ron though.

I still think that Hermione believes that Draco used her despite Harry's reassurances to the contrary. How perceptive of Harry as well as decent of him; since, he detests Draco he could have kept mum about his observations of Draco watching Hermione. Also, Hermione doesn't want to hurt Ron, but since she isn't in love with him, it seems unavoidable. I'm glad that Ron didn't run away.

And then, Draco is stuck sacrificing his love for her to serve the higher purpose of defeating Voldy and his Death Eater minions. I LOVE Draco's "...one hair on her head is harmed...all bets are off" as well as his "...again and again...for as long as we both shall live". The former was sweet and heroic. The latter was sexy. Snape's snarky attitude brought some dark humor into this chapter too.

All in all, this was a wonderful read. I'll be watching for the next chapter. Nice work, ReiRei.