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person QueenB
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22 It's so wonderful to have Narcisa involved at last. I was also worried about her reaction although I knew neither Harry nor Draco would let it interfere with their plans. I wonder what will happen when Lucius Malfoy finds out. That's going to be something to read about.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This chapter made me smile so hard. I'm so Ron is in a good place with their relationship and yes, it's still weird to hear Harry call Draco baby and I'm glad me and Ron are on the same page with that. Draco is too cute being a stay at home pregnant man waiting to hear from his sweetie. I hope nothing bad happens to Harry or him, please don't hurt Draco or the baby : ). Oh and yay for including Angelina, love her : )
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
person Leentjef
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very very good chapter and very sweet
keep going and post soon
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person QueenB
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21 Of course Harry is having trouble with his fellow students and teachers. It's actually good to see that not everyone is treating him as Merlin's gift to the wizarding world; it'll keep him humble. But if he could handle Voldemort, a little dislike from other students and teachers means nothing.

The rest is so sweet, the daddy calling home to check on how the little wifey is doing. (sniffs) Ron is going to have a field day with that "baby" comment. :D
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh the irony of the word baby :]
person Leentjef
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Janae
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad the two can go out now and spend time with friends. And it seems that Harry's friends are really becoming Draco's finally. Yay for them! Please don't screw this up and put in some tragic event..lol. OK, I guess I can't ask you not to do that, 'cause you guys are totally unpredictable and this is already complete. Sigh...Anyway, it's good to see that maybe Ginny will be hooking up with Dean again? I hope so, I think that's the way it should be anyway, even in the books. The cake sex scene was hot....like seeing Harry getting fucked for a change, lol.
person QueenB
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19 I'm so glad to see this closure with Ginny. You detail her emotions so clearly and it sounds like exactly what a person goes through when they lose the person they love. It's good that she can greet Draco so calmly; it shows that she's matured. You certainly make her a much better person than the ones I've read in other stories that make her out to be an evil, conniving bitca. ;D