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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story...please continue
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had many different opinions on this story. Overall I enjoyed reading it (read all 87 chapters in 2 days) =p. But in my opinion there is definately room for improvement. I enjoy where the storyline is heading so far, but in my opinion there aree far too many sex scenes, it gets repetitive to me. Perhaps I am on the wrong site, then but towards later chapters i started completely skipping the sex scenes as they started to bore me. I don't know, that's just my opinion though ^ ^. Good story overall though. looking forward to reading more =p
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave it like that can you?? Please finish this story, it's really good. I want to see what happens to Lucy when she fully comes into her powers and whether she and Snape manage to bond properly.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm reredaing this story as I enjoyed it so far and wanted to reacquaint myself, but I noticed something in chapter 1 that I had previously overlooked. Manchester Central railway station isn't active anymore and hasn't been since long before I was born in the early 80's (It's now a conference/exhibition centre) The train to Kings Cross would leave from Manchester Piccadilly. (the same journey JK took on which she began writing HP)
Hope that was helpful!
I'm reredaing this story as I enjoyed it so far and wanted to reacquaint myself, but I noticed something in chapter 1 that I had previously overlooked. Manchester Central railway station isn't active anymore and hasn't been since long before I was born in the early 80's (It's now a conference/exhibition centre) The train to Kings Cross would leave from Manchester Piccadilly. (the same journey JK took on which she began writing HP)
Hope that was helpful!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated this story.
I read it a long time ago but,asit had been so long since it was updated, I assumed you had discontinued it. I hope your muses have returned to you for good and anxiously await the rest of this fascinating tale.
I read it a long time ago but,asit had been so long since it was updated, I assumed you had discontinued it. I hope your muses have returned to you for good and anxiously await the rest of this fascinating tale.
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am well and fully nauseated after that rape scene; gah, I hope there aren't any more of those.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is too cute. She's a brassy girl, I love her; and the entrails...blarrrgh! Love Snape in this, too. He deserves her.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my god :O
i read this story in 2 days hehehe >:]
totally love =D
its interesting and different =D
plz update soon!
i read this story in 2 days hehehe >:]
totally love =D
its interesting and different =D
plz update soon!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update your story!!!!! I really really whant to know the end of it please!!!!!! it is a great story and I`mshure that everybody will whant to know the end!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IT!!!!! CCINO
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was great this just keeps getting better by the chapter!