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for The Little Flat

by LVanna

schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I love this story and hope you keep updating it. I really enjoyed Hermione finally telling Molly off. :)

schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am the worst one for reading and not reviewing. I just assume that other people will review. I am, at this moment, watching a blizzard blow through my back yard, and took the time to see if you updated. What I enjoy about your story is that it is easy to read. By that I mean that you have clearly taken the time and effort to proofread and edit. Nothing annoys me more than a good story idea ruined by bad spelling and grammar. I like the way that the characters are developing, and would like to know more about how the relationship between Hermione and Severus developed in the first place. (But I do not like to tell authors how I think that their story should go because they have made the effort to write). I look forward to future chapters!
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kinda like the plot to this story. It reminds me of 'But You Alone' by Azazello (one of the best fanfics ever). Is this one going to be short and sweet or is all hell about to break loose? I'm keen to see where this is going.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! poor ron and hermoine. mrs. weasley is awful!! update soon, i can't wait til severus hears the news!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm already addicted and completely in love with this story! Please update soon!
person DB1
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@2 great story. i can't wait for more.

*DB*
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, this is such a sweet story. what's going to happen next?? update soon!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.