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for Black Lagoon

by Extraho

person MORE
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OFT
HAWT!!!
Write more yes?
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's pretty much the most amazing first chapter I've ever read. I loved it! Although, it does say one-shot on it. I was wondering if it was meant to be a one-shot, or if you were going to follow up on Fenrir's note. I loved this chapter though. I loved that when it was all done, after Fenrir had fucked Harry's brains out, he wasn't really done at all! He started up again. And Dudly liking gay sex. That's almost too much for me to imagine. I loved how nice he was afterwards though. That was pretty funny. ~dpa06~
person harial
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I do so love harry/fenrir fics. there aren't nearly enough of them, and even fewer of those are any good. Please continue with this one!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well done i do hope u add to this
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking Awesome!!!!!!!

I seriously hope that you will continue this story, I may cry if you don't. There are not enough good Harry/Fenrir fanfics, and this story is one of the best. Especially the smut, the smut was excellent. ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing...i thought harry was older in this one, but i like him seventeen. please continue this fic. it sounds interesting and i want greyback to return and claim harry. are you turning harry into a werewolf in this? anyway..please continue
person Icis1984
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!! PLEASE continue more with this story, I want to see how this turn out. There aren't many good Fenrir/Harry stories out there, and this really looks like a good one. PLEASE e-mail me Icis1984@aol.com if you will continue this or not. It's to good of story/first chapter to be left hanging.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaahahahahahaha I think thats great!!!! Bloody awesome!!!! Harry wanted Dudley that way, yet he unded up the sore one. Although I can see Harry going back for more lol. I think you should continue/write a sequel!!! The whole "I'll get you when you're ready" thing. Good job!
person nsal
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is not going to be a oneshot is it? Please please please PLEASE continue this! Atleast make it a two shot with more hot, sweaty, raunchy, monkey sex! We readers are left with so many questions: what will Petunia and Vernon say when they see their son/nephew limping? What did the mysterious note mean? Is Harry a werewolf now? WILL THERE BE MORE MONKEY SEX?!

Update soon! PLeAsEE!!!