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for Queen Gryffs

by Smuff

person Anon
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! You accomplished your goal... for me at least anyway. :)
person thepoet3035
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well thank u it nice to no u love me lol i love ur story and im happy u came out ur shell but where r my manners im thepoet3035 im the creator of the horny at hogworts my account was deleted and idk y but i be upload my storys back and i am hoping to contien u them
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't generally like het but daaaamn, Weasleycest is hot. I like this fic a lot!
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great smut fic but when r u going to update??
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS HOT!!! Vauguely disturbing, but damn good. I don't know why these types of stories work for me, but they do. This one was just...guh. The floodgates opened.
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ginny knocked up by ron, hot preggo incest
person testes
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a disGUStingly squickified story. I love it. Excellent imagination and also the ability to take it out of your mind's eye and put it to paper. Good job.
person Mellow03
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, the review I gave to you is the story. Sorry a bit for the confusion. Anyway, if you are implying the taboo that is dirty itself. The taboo as dirty. You say it don't have to be watersport and anal stuff, and small scat. I was not sure to put scat cause it was sentensive, even it is taboo. Anyway, good chapter. And the piss and blood that Ginny had, hope in next chapter that Ron or any other mouth will clean it off from Ginny's father. Can do same stuff when parents are awake. Put male-slash. As female-slash. Can put how Ginny like to piss or be piss, emotionally, when talk to another person? And more? It is rare to see watersport and dirty stuff, little scat, more rare for scat as it is none that I know. Well, little as after anal stuff when it is bit dirty and clean it off with mouth. I was imply the taboo only to human and anything that is within human that come out in sexual nature. Can include beast too? If not plan put alot, can put little range or few stuff that come out of body in sexual nature in your story. No cleaning charm, but mouth kind for cleaning after sex. After the mouth, can take shower or anything to clean it off. When I say little, I mean little semen on body, little semen go into mouth. Not alot or many. That is refer to little range or few stuff. Keep it up. Hope would have all kinks in relate to human body within and out. Within as semen and other stuff. Well, not all, but mostly that is definitely dirty, not just liquid kind. But mix with solid or solid. Sperm as thick liquid as an example.
person Jamy
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say this is one of the hottest stories I've ever read. You probably have everything that makes me hot in this fic, and you definitely achieved your goal with me =] Many times over lol. I'd never do this in real life, but you have me so hot reading this, that I'm just begging for more. I've been waiting for someone to write a good Ginny/Arthur fic, and I love the addition of the watersports, as well as Ron/Ginny of course, those two are sexy as hell together. I hope you come back with more soon!
person luvhp
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, an update, A hot one at that! Only sorry to see that they were asleep and were unable to enjoy it as much as Ron & Ginny! :)
I do hope you continue with this, I want to see the twins with Ginny & Ron, you had mentioned it earlier in the convo with Ron/Charlie :) That would be so effing HOT!
Loving it, the dirty talk galore gets the clit twitching!