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by XDracoMalfoyLoverX

schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry sounds pretty unhinged in this fic, I bet he would share pansy with ron.
person hoser41
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't often see Harry written like this. I really like this story and I am waiting for more.
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Harry is so evil hehehe
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finish this fic.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking where this is going so far, and i'd like to see how everything plays out between the characters... i just wish aff.net had story alerts like ff.net, it'd make it so much easier to keep track of quality stories like this.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more? plz
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. There rn't many good story lk in online anymore. As much as I'm again slavery, i have to say I don't feel bad for Pansy at all. Make Harry humiliate her more.
person Tygris
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't get me wrong, this is really a great story. It's very well-written and well paced. However, Pansy is not an OFC. Neither is Luna. OFC stands for 'Own Female Character.' I think as it is right now these fall under the category of male/female or general. Or you could ask the mods to add new categories for your stories, I suppose. Just wanted to clear that up. Otherwise, fantastic story thus far, as well as your Draco/Luna story. I look forward to reading more of your work!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea...Pansy being Harry's bitch is kinda hot...please write more...