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for Enslaved

by XDracoMalfoyLoverX

schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Actually have always been a huge Harry/Pansy fan because they are such an interesting couple. can't wait to read more!
person miniac
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist there, letting Hermione catch them. Pansy's totally right, she needs an orgasm...

"We eat here" *dies laughing*

Anyhow, I love this fic. Dom!Harry is one of my fav Harrys, and the HP/PP pairing is (in my mind) severly underrated and underrepresented at this site. I mean, the guy almost got sorted into Slytherin, and if 'Mione is going to get Draco, then we can't leave either Harry or Pansy hanging, right? (I'm a huge shipper of DM/HG, btw...)

Kudos and hugs for a great fic!
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting more interesting! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, as always!
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice and easy, as usual. Not too long before "I don't want you to die" becomes "I love you."
In truth, I was wondering when Hermione would tumble onto what was happening in the house, I mean, c'mon. Four hormonal teens in a house and a whole lot of sexin' goin' on and the brightest witch of our age can neither hear nor smell what's been going on?
person pfeil
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope this gets Hermione hot and bothered enough to join in =)

Maybe she did get aroused by it, and Pansy uses that to tease her, but things go further than she was expecting?
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL@ Hermione's reaction....oh yeah, the kitchen table will never be the same...hmm...are Pansy and Harry developing real feelings for each other?
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please have another chapter out ASAP, this is such a great story!
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Over twelve-thousand hits and only 22 reviews? Let me be part of the not-so-silent minority.
This is a well written psychodrama that has less to do with magic and more to do with humanity.
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person Dragen
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start mate, can't wait to see what happens next.
person Dragen
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter mate, I love how Harry is controlling Pansy, and can't wait to see more.