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Interesting..this is becoming a love triangle..I wonder what Ron would say to that? Hermione's blow job was pretty hot stuff, even if Harry called out Pansy's name at the end. LOL. That was pretty funny btw. I am interested in where you're taking this and if Harry will come out and tell Pansy that he has feelings for her and if he'll nip this thing with his best friend in the bud before it gets out of hand. Good update.

started good, but seems it's going to be another harry gets to fuck everyone story, if ron ever found out he wouldn't ever forgive them, so i'm guessing you're going to paint him off like the bad guy?

That was an excellent chapter, And having hermione become jealous of pansy was incredable. and that little peek into how hermione wants to please harry is showing something that she can't get from ron. and that is total trust someone becoming submissive to another shows a large amount of trust, and having hermione actively trying to be with harry will propably make her rethink trying to be with ron if she wants harry as her master.

I don't understand why he kicked Hermione out. I suppose he could have done it to increase Pansy's feelings for him (she beat out the mudblood, so she should be happy), but he just hurt his friend. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, and he should be very, very worried about her going to Ron and confessing, or in the very least hurting his friendship with her. In a previous chapter he *seemed* concerned about their friendship and how it might be affected by the domination game, but now he just seems to be thinking with his dick.

I hope he learns a lesson soon. There is a difference between being dominant, and being an asshole.

That was kinda cold of Harry the way he totally dissed Hermione....Hermione and Pansy together was kinda hot : )) I like that even though Harry and Pansy are having anal sex it seems almost like they're making love. good update : )

Love this chapter. Please update soon!

Elf-transport for Pansy is a nice touch.

I hope Pansy finds Harry controlling Hermione soon =)

Taking a step backward there. As Harry tries to break Pansy he will also break.

Awww..confusion abounds...poor Harry needs to fess up to his growing reliance and love for Pansy...I hope Pansy doesn' t flip the script and take revenge. Good update : )

Why is he preserving her virginity? Her position right now ranks with a house elf? She and Hermione should compete to see who can please Harry better the winner should have to give up their virginity.