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by XDracoMalfoyLoverX

schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!!
This is the hottest story I've ever read for Harry/Pansy.
Heck it's the first i've read for those this paring, I didn't think
they'd mesh well...
Boy was I wrong! lol You gotta update soon k.
I just love this story.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I'm always so happy when I see you've updated!
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why aren't there more great stories like this one?? Cant' wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, they almost did it....I'm glad Harry discovered who it really was, too bad Pansy did also. I'm not feeling Hermione in this fic, and if that's your intention, mission accomplished. She's way too needy and just annoying here, I hope Harry ditches her and tells Pansy what's up for real. I wouldn't mind Ron finding out about Hermione's little crush as well to see what the fallout will be.Oh, you have a misspelling in the last line. Can't wait to see what happens next....good update.
person pfeil
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shame he can't keep both of them as his slaves...

person 94caddy
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. But I like that Hermione seems to want to be with Harry and not Ron.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As I kept reading this wonderful story, I kept thinking when she would sneak out of Black Manor and inform LV about her success. Hermione getting into the picture is a good twist. She'll have to realize that she can't cross that line with Harry. Ron will have to find out sooner or later. This Mewtwo will be waiting for the next chapter.
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really digging the hr/h/p threesome i so desperately hope that this doesnt end hr/r...
person lycus
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter.But Hermione needs to wake up and forget the lie that she is telling herself. If she really wanted to be with ron she would be with ron, And the whole I want it to be good for ron is utter bullshit, She wants Harry to be her best friend, Lover, and Master she would never give ron control of her like she gave Harry and her jealousy of Pansy is making her realise that she wants Harry in every way, And lets face facts Hermione wants Harry and won't settle for less.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man, I LOVE Harry in this story. He's so devilishly sexy. And two strong women fighting over him is delicious, as is his diverse reactions to them both. I find Harry quite funny in this role. Looking forward to more.