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person lycus
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was harsh, But I do think that Harry is brushing off Hermiones true feelings. He has probably fallen into that trap that people seem to think that Ron and Hermione belong together beacause they argue so much. But if Hermione points out that if that was true than he would end up with Ginny and wouldn't be able to feel anything for Pansy, Harry has to realise that people change Hermione may have wanted Ron but she clearly doesn't want him now. And as far as lasting relationships go Ron and Hermione wouldn't last a week if they were on their own how many couples last if they argue as much as they do. And the fact is that Hermione is very smart and has most likely used logic to figure out that she doesn't want to be with Ron and wants to be with Harry, And she had a drastic change of character beacause she figured that she has to do something drastic to get Harry to change the way he thinks about her, To get him to think of her not only as a best friend but as a woman and a lover who wants to be with him.
person pfeil
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ron's an asshole; Shame he didn't bleed to death.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm certainly glad that Harry is starting to set Hermione straight. Too bad that Pansy will be at the burrow for awhile, but I look forward to where you take this from here. I can't imagine how you plan on repairing relationships, especially between Ron and (Hermione and Harry). I do want him to find out, as it would be wrong to keep it from him, but I hope it can be approached to him in the least painful way possible. Nice job with this chapter.
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I checked this. Good to see you're still going, and I am really enjoying what I've read of the new chapters so far.
Looking forward to where you take this thing with Herm, and so far the ride's enjoyable enough, as long as Pansy doesn't get left in the dust, I don't think I'll care.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Just as Pansy and Harry were on the cusp of a true relationship, too! Now it's up to Harry to bite the bullet and tell Pansy how he feels... And kick Hermione's ARSE
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish you'd write more!!! I LOVE your story!!!
person Iysa
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, I'm a huge Harry/Pansy fan. I like how it switches from rough to soft then back to rough. The only thing that bothers me is Hermione, I'm sure for reasons you know. Update soon, please.
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where is the next chapter??? This is so good!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I find this interesting, although I really liked it better before Hermione became so needy, even after Ron's wounds. I'm hoping for a "happy" ending of course. Will Draco be making an actual appearance? I can assume he wouldn't approve of him and Pansy. I look forward to more.
person lycus
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.K. Hermione is delousinial, But you can't deny that she wants to be Harrys and she is smart enough to make it happen either by enslaving herself to him on a permenant basis. or calling in one of her life debts. and the fact that Harry actually enjoys being in charge sooner or later the thought of Hermione will start to appeal to him.