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by XDracoMalfoyLoverX

schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You stupid anti-Hermione fool, dismissing her as a prude.

“She needs a fucking orgasm.” Pansy responded tightly.

Oh please. The real reason Hermione's not getting as much action as Pansy is that unlike Pansy, Hermione needs men, not boys.
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Much better. Though why Hermione cares what Ron thinks, or even wishes to date the idiot boy, is highly unclear. I like her blackmailing Harry into using Harry as a portable dildo. He's not useful for much else. Go Cougarmione!
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I'm glad you haven't abandond the story. I hope the next update come relativly quickly and not another 3 years later. I know that you said you were finaly updating. Does that mean that you just resumed the story? Is it still WIP? Or have you completed it?
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When will this story be updated again? Its such a good story and I enjoy reading it.
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see this story back. Although, I have to admit I find your Hermione completely OOC, I do love the dynamic you have going between Harry and Pansy. The way they mentally try to one up each other is amusing.

Harry giving Pansy a whipping was seriously hot. Loved that she wound him up by reacting favorably to the spanking. Lol, if they could just admit out loud that they are mad for each other, maybe they could finally get some mind blowing sex out of the deal! Hope you have them see the error of their ways soon.
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I never thought I'd see an update again! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it the next one doesn't take as long! :)
person lycus
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add that if Hermione was really in love with Ron wouldn't she be with him when he almost died? Yes she would and where did she go as soon as she could? To Harry. And the sooner that Harry figures this out the sooner we can get some Hermione lovin.
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ugh... I'm finally accepting the fact that Hermione wont be involved with H/P(most unfortunate) just please dont make us poor readers endure any disgusting hr/r-ness... (btw a threesome story is not equivalent to harry fucking everyone story, in the latter every girl's personality becomes the same and they're just holes, whereas its much easier to keep the girls distinct in a threesome fic since its only 3 personalities to really maintain.)
person Iysa
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad there was another chapter add and that Hermione is, hopefully, finally out of the picture. Hope to read Pansy in the next chapter.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!