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by EighthSaga

person tweetmoobaa
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh! i'm loving your story! and i'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter =)
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, you can't end it at 10 chapters, the build up has been so slow and perfect! And Chapter 6 wow, forceful Draco, me likey! I love that Hermione has figured it out, and yes there will be hell to pay in the morning, cuz she is quite the hellcat when necessary, man they are going to be explosive! I love your Draco, such quiet, intimidating, sensual power, just radiating off of him, and hell off my screen. Keep it up, my one and only favorite Draco/Veela fic!
person mhaj78
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really turning out well! I'm really enjoying it, I was so glad to see that you had updated. I love that he mandated their little sleepover, I'm glad that she finally "knows" and now they can begin to come together in preparation for the bonding! Please, please, please update soon. I had forgotten past chapters so went back and re-read the whole thing--and was reminded of what a great story this is!!
person librarygirl
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am so glad to hear that you plan to finish it. Too many Veela stories out there seems to be unfinished forever.
person Stag
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling really giddy. I can't wait to read about Hermione's reaction to their intimacy!

Why DOES she deny him?? It's Draco fucking Malfoy.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I stumbled across this story here and thought it seemed familiar. Then I realized I had read the beginning on HPFF. REALLY REALLY glad I found it here. I love this need you're building up and I can't wait for more. So, please update again soon. Thanks!
person iluv2dance
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please update soon! Really enjoy your version on Veela.
person ichiruki
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I love the book titles lol! I like seeing Draco snap out of his Veela induced "daze" or "infatuation" to set Hermione straight a bit with the sleep thing. :D It totally seems like something he would do. That and the thoughts of love, children, money and sex LOL! I like slightly naughty!Draco, so it's always good when he comes out to play. Poor Hermione, just trying to delay the inevitable lol, silly witch. I'm wondering how long she's going to fight it.

Careful with the review-hungry Muse, the more you get the more addictive it is, really, its like crack. *holds hand up to swear it's totally true* Then you find yourself checking e-mail or AFF.net to see if you got a new one instead of finishing that line you're working on... erm, mmm, umm, ack, ahem...or so I have found *grins guiltily* XD But that said "review cookies" can be totally motivating when you truly are stuck, wondering why you write at all, and then you breeze through a few and grin like an idiot for about ten mins and then really go finish that line or chapter that's giving you heartache.

keep up the good work! :)
ichi.ruki
person jeffrey_dallas
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only 10 chapters? Shame - this was developing so nice and slow. Anyway, please update soon!
person Raven
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely twist on a Veela!Draco fic. Can't wait to read what happens next.