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by EighthSaga

person Aurora
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WELL ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!!! Honestly this is one of my favourite stories and the wait has been toooooooo long! Loved this update, very intense i get butterflies thinking she has finally given in and then its a dream! (You big tease) Please update soon and make it a goodie if you catch my drift! well done your a great writer.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved that dream at the start - hopefully a sign at how good things are gonna get. I also love when Draco gets all possessive and protective.

I dunno about her just giving in, I think I would like her to be a bit stubborn and only when Draco starts to lose it does she give in. Obviously not sending him completely crackers but just a little bit.

congrats on an ace story by the way and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im very proud of you! i enjoyed the chap and do want to see him buckle first...if you will. please!!!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the part I like best is where she gets the new book that basically tells her that she's buggered to hell. :D
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha! love this chapter...sweet and seems Hermione still confused! ahh keep updating...i want more! good job!!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like where this story is headed... i personally like the possessive veela that is not really in control... but that's just me. love the story! keep up the great work!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favorite part, ummmm that would be the part where you say this fic will NOT end anytime soon, and you're going to keep writing! No but seriously, I love the dreams, and the book titles are the best! Even though you are ending this *pout*, I just want to say thank you for sharing such a wonderful story, I have eagerly anticipated it since I found it, and I will be sad to see it end.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have just discovered your story. What a find! Really good.
I loved the part when Hemione goes missing and Draco carries her
back to dorms. Simply a loving piece of writing. Best wishes,
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for this update. very well written, and i do believe hermione should give in, but not just make it easy. she should gift draco with her trust, maybe she could wear a special nightgown for him or something so he knows that she is doing it because she wants to. anywho, can't wait for the next chapter...keep up the good work.
person Snowe
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I'd rather have Hermione take control of the situation and have it happen on her own terms, instead of waiting until Draco snaps.

"He pulled her closer and buried his nose in her hair, trying to reassure her. It's hard to reassure someone who wasn't assured in the first place."

I liked this bit especially.